3.en.83 Sometimes things don’t turn out as planned

This week the two outings we had planned did not turn out exactly as expected. But that’s life isn’t it? Well, to begin with, we did not manage to reach the sea on Tuesday’s excursion. A fenced private property and a gate made us take the wrong way. However, if we look at the positive side of things, you had the opportunity to have a good time with friends and to enjoy nature. I forgot my camera, that explains why I cannot publish any pics in the blog until you send me some. This morning with Taylor, we practised narrating in groups what had happened. You did a good job and learnt a lot. Taylor and me had problems to remember what the English word for the sound donkeys make, but finally, with on line dictonary help, we got it! BRAY

So, while I wait for your homework and your pics from the donkeys we saw, I leave here in the blog a cute donkey braying desperately for food. Does it sound the same as the ones we heard during on the outing?

This morning you walked to la Caixa with Bernat, only to discover that it was the wrong day. The activity,taller d’interpretació poètica ,will be next week,Thursday the 7th of April. I apologize for mistaking the dates, but I am sure you enjoyed the walk with Bernat; it was a nice day today and he always has interesting stories to tell you.

Last year the poetry workshop was a success and I hope this year, we shall not miss it next Thursday, will be so too. Click here if you’d like to read what the students of 2nd ESO thought of it. I include a photo of the poetry festival that took place at la Caixa and a short video of Daryl and Xilin. This year it will be your turn.

These are  the first  narratives of the outing. They were fast to send them, well done!

HOMEWORK (Monday 4th April)

  • Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
  • Spelling?
  • Word choice?
  • Coherence?
  • Organization of ideas?
  • Paragraph structure?

Send your suggestions to the blog. On Monday we shall correct them together.

Have a nice weekend!

The outing.

Last Tuesday we went on an outing to “es port des Canonge” with two school buses. When we arrived we walked along some routes for about 30 minuts, but we saw two different routes and we got lost. We walked up the mountain to find the buses. When the teachers found the buses, we went back to the high school. We arrived at high school at quarter past one. From Palma to “port des Canonge” there’s approximately one hour by bus. The weather was sunny and hot. On the outing there were about one hundred students.
Written by Marga, Joan, Pau and Marta.

Port d’es Canonge outing:

The last tuesday we went to an excursion called “Port d’es Canonge”.We were 100 persons more or less and we took two buses. The weather was sunny and a little bit cloudy.
When we arrived to the roat we walked 35 minutes and later we took other way and in that moment we got lost in the top of the mountain. We were very tired when we found a flat area. In that moment all the teachers called to some mini-buses to take us from that place.
That excursion was very funy because you can talk and you can have fun with your friends but in some moments the excusrion was tired and boring.
Writen by Noé, Paula Gomila, Joan Sebastià and Marina.

The outing:
On Tuesday we went to an excursion to “Port des Canonge”.
We were about 100 people and we went with two buses.
The bus left us near the “farm of esporles”.
We started walking and we found a propriety that was closed by a fence.
Then we started to climb the mountain and we went to a wrong path and we got lost.

-The best thing of the excursion is that we did different things that all the other days. For example, talk a lot.

-And the worst thing is that we got lost and we were tired.

Written by Ariadna Balufo

Summary

Last tuesday we went to an outing to “Es Port des Canonges” . We were approximatety 100 people. We went in two buses. First the day was cloudy, but after the sun came and the day was very good.

When we arrived, we walked to searched the beach, but we got lost. Then continue another way around the mountain to reach the top. There we stopped to ate and then continue and reach the road. There the teachers called the buses, we came for. The bus left us at the school, where we left each home.

This outing are very good and funny, because we took for the friends and played. If we had lost, would had been better.

BY:
Paula Socies, Ritish, Isabela and Sergio.

The outing:
The last Tuesday we went on an outing to “Port des Canonge”. It was sunny and hot. We went with two buses. We were one hundred students. We wanted to go, but there were some problems. We walked and we went up and down.
In one part of the way, there were two ways, and we take the wrong way. In one part of this way, we found a dead goat. A little bit later, we stoped and we lunched. Some of the techers went to search the way. We walked, and in one part, we found bones. The teachers decided we have to return. In the high school, we had free time, and we played and talked about the outing.
-The good point is that we do some different.
-The bad point is we were very tired.

Written by Alvaro, Alba, Andrea and Vladis.



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36 Respostes to “3.en.83 Sometimes things don’t turn out as planned”

  1. martitaserra28 Says:

    The outing.

    Last Tuesday we went on an outing to “es port des Canonge”
    with two school buses. When we arrived we walked along some routes for about 30 minuts, but we saw two different routes and we got lost. We walked up the mountain to find the buses. When the teachers found the buses, we went back to the high school. We arrived at high school at quarter past one.
    From Palma to “port des Canonge” there’s approximately one hour by bus.
    The weather was sunny and hot.
    On the outing there were about one hundred students.
    Written by Marga, Joan, Pau and Marta.

    1- Does it sound the same as the ones we heard during on the outing?
    Yes, it does.

  2. ariadnabalufo Says:

    The outing:
    On Tuesday we went to an excursion to “Port des Canonge”.
    We were about 100 people and we went with two buses.
    The bus left us near the “farm of esporles”.
    We started walking and we found a propriety that was closed by a fence.
    Then we started to climb the mountain and we went to a wrong path and we got lost.

    -The best thing of the excursion is that we did different things that all the other days. For example, talk a lot.

    -And the worst thing is that we got lost and we were tired.

  3. marinaescarpa11 Says:

    Port d’es Canonge outing:
    The last tuesday we went to an excursion called “Port d’es Canonge”.We were 100 persons more or less and we took two buses. The weather was sunny and a little bit cloudy.
    When we arrived to the roat we walked 35 minutes and later we took other way and in that moment we got lost in the top of the mountain. We were very tired when we found a flat area. In that moment all the teachers called to some mini-buses to take us from that place.
    That excursion was very funy because you can talk and you can have fun with your friends but in some moments the excusrion was tired and boring.
    Writen by Noé, Paula Gomila, Joan Sebastià and Marina.

  4. paulinguigs Says:

    Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I can.
    100 persons: 100 people.
    roat: road.
    funy: funny.
    you can talk and you can have fun with your friends: we can talked and we could have fun with our friends.

    Spelling?
    roat: road.
    funy: funny.

    Word choice?
    No, I can’t.

    Coherence?
    No, I can’t.
    Organization of ideas?
    Yes, first: where we go?; second: what happened?; third: conclusion; fourth: opinion.

    Paragraph structure?
    It’s good but it can be better.

  5. vladis890 Says:

    The outing:
    The last Tuesday we went on an outing to “Port des Canonge”. It was sunny and hot. We went with two buses. We were one hundred students. We wanted to go, but there were some problems. We walked and we went up and down.
    In one part of the way, there were two ways, and we take the wrong way. In one part of this way, we found a dead goat. A little bit later, we stoped and we lunched. Some of the techers went to search the way. We walked, and in one part, we found bones. The teachers decided we have to return. In the high school, we had free time, and we played and talked about the outing.
    -The good point is that we do some different.
    -The bad point is we were very tired.

    • vladis890 Says:

      Written by Alvaro, Alba, Andrea and Vladis.
      Does it sound the same as the ones we heard during on the outing?
      -Yes, it does.

      • jospomar Says:

        # Spelling?
        Yes there are mistakes but Paula saied all.
        # Word choice?
        No i think they haven’t got mistakes
        # Coherence?
        All of them have coherence.
        # Organization of ideas?
        The location, transport little bi about the route and the best and the worst thing.
        # Paragraph structure?
        They are so good someones can be improved.

  6. izabelaigorova02 Says:

    Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    *Yes there are mistakes.

    Spelling?
    *The spelling is good.

    Word choice?
    *Is good

    Coherence?
    *All of them have coherence.

    Organization of ideas?
    *The organization of ideas are very good.

    Paragraph structure?
    *Is so good.

  7. vidalsiquierj Says:

    # Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    That’s right, there are some mistakes like: ” 100 people” or “roat”.

    # Spelling?
    I think that the spelling was good.

    # Word choice?
    It wasn’t bad.

    # Coherence?
    All of the summarys have coherence.

    # Organization of ideas?
    The organization was good.

    # Paragraph structure?
    Is also good if the organization of ideas was good.

  8. vidalandreu98 Says:

    -Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I saw some ones but not very much.

    -Spelling?
    Some word like “roat” but i thong the rest was good.

    -Word choice?
    Was ok

    -Coherence?
    I think all summarys have coherence

    -Organization of ideas?
    The organization was ok

    -Paragraph structure?
    I think that de paragraph structure was very nice

  9. vladis890 Says:

    *Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    -Yes, there are some mistakes.
    *Spelling?
    -The spelling was good, but can improve.
    *Word choice?
    -It was good.
    *Coherence?
    -The summaries have a good coherence.
    *Organization of ideas?
    -The summaries have the ideas very organized.
    *Paragraph structure?
    -The paragraph structure is good.

  10. AlbaaSoriaa Says:

    • Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I can.
    100 persons: 100 people.
    roat: road.
    funy: funny.
    • Spelling?
    roat: road.
    funy: funny.
    • Word choice?
    No, I can’t.
    • Coherence?
    No, I can’t.
    Organization of ideas?
    The location, transport little bi about the route and the best and the worst
    • Paragraph structure?
    It’s good but it can be better.

  11. jhazminmarmol Says:

    -Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, there are some mistakes.
    -Spelling?
    I think the spelling was good.
    -Word choice?
    It is good.
    -Coherence?
    I think that all of the summaries have coherence.
    -Organization of ideas?
    The organization was very good.
    -Paragraph structure?
    The paragraph structure was ok.

  12. alvaroalemany Says:

    1.- Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    – Yes, there are some mistakes, but is good.

    2.- Spelling?
    – The spelling is good.

    3.- Word choice?
    – It’s good

    4.- Coherence?
    – The coherenceof the summaries is good.

    5.- Organization of ideas?
    – Yes, the ideas are organized.

    6.- Paragraph structure?
    – The paragraph is good, good summaries.

  13. pausegui Says:

    •Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    -Yes I can.
    •Spelling?
    -The spelling is so good.
    •Word choice?
    -I think is good.
    •Coherence?
    The coherence of the sumaries is good.
    •Organization of ideas?
    -I think the organitation was litle good.
    •Paragraph structure?
    -For my is good.

  14. miquelbv9 Says:

    1.Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    -Yes, I can.
    2.Spelling?
    -The spelling is good.
    3.Word choice?
    -I think it is good.
    4.Coherence?
    -I think it is good to.
    5.Organization of ideas?
    -It is easy see a good organitzation of ideas.
    6.Paragraph structure?
    -It is O.K.

  15. psocies Says:

    outing:
    On tuesday we went to a feal trip to es Port des Canonge, but we don’t arrive because we got lost. We where about 100 people. We climb the mountain and we hat to found a road. In the mountain we saw a dead stinky goat. We where very tied but it was funny.

    -Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, there are some mistakes.
    -Spelling?
    I think the spelling was good.
    -Word choice?
    It is good.
    -Coherence?
    I think that all of the summaries have coherence.
    -Organization of ideas?
    The organization was very good.
    -Paragraph structure?
    The paragraph structure was ok

    • sergiomr226 Says:

      Summary

      Last tuesday we went to an outing to “Es Port des Canonges” . We were approximatety 100 people. We went in two buses. First the day was cloudy, but after the sun came and the day was very good.

      When we arrived, we walked to searched the beach, but we got lost. Then continue another way around the mountain to reach the top. There we stopped to ate and then continue and reach the road. There the teachers called the buses, we came for. The bus left us at the school, where we left each home.

      This outing are very good and funny, because we took for the friends and played. If we had lost, would had been better.

      BY:
      Paula Socies, Ritish, Isabela and Sergio.

      Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
      – Yes, I can some mistakes.

      Spelling?
      – Is good, but some words are not good spelling.

      Word choice?
      – Sometimes.

      Coherence?
      – I think yes, but in my summary I think not coherence.

      Organization of ideas?
      – A little bit.

      Paragraph structure?
      – I think not good.

  16. ritish7580 Says:

    Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes.
    Spelling?
    Good.
    Word choice?
    I think it’s good.
    Coherence?
    I think that is good.
    Organization of ideas?
    I don’t have any idea, because is very good.
    Paragraph structure?
    Good.

  17. marinaescarpa11 Says:

    1-Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    *Yes, I found some mistakes.
    2-Spelling?
    *Is good.
    2-Word choice?
    I think is nice.
    3-Coherence?
    *I think the coherence is ok
    4-Organization of ideas?
    *Is very good.
    5-Paragraph structure?
    The paragraph structure is good.

  18. noesanzu Says:

    # Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    – Yes, I can find some mistakes. No, I can’t suggest any improvements.
    # Spelling?
    – I think their spelling is ok.
    # Word choice?
    – I think their word choice is ok too.
    # Coherence?
    – All of them have coherence.
    # Organization of ideas?
    – I think the organisation of ideas is good.
    # Paragraph structure?
    – I think their paragraph structure is very good.

    Maria, I think you have one mistake, you have written “organization” and I think it is “organisation” 🙂

  19. paucampomar Says:

    Have a nice weekendCan you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    No, I dindn’t found the mistakes
    Spelling?
    Good
    Word choice?
    Good
    Coherence?
    The coherence its good
    Organization of ideas?
    Good

  20. margaabauza Says:

    1.Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    -Yes, I can.
    2.Spelling?
    -The spelling is good.
    3.Word choice?
    -I think it is good.
    4.Coherence?
    -Is good to.
    5.Organization of ideas?
    -Good organitzation of ideas.
    6.Paragraph structure?
    -It is good.

  21. margaabauza Says:

    Last Tuesday one hundred students of 1st year ESO went to ”Es port d’es Canonge” with two buses, but the two buses dropped us near ”Sa Granja d’Esporles” where we started to walk. It was sunny and hot, and we were very happy. Then we arrived at the place where there were two routes, but we took the wrong one and we got lost. We go up and down the mountain and we were very angry because we were tired. We searched the buses to go to high school and we arrived it at quarter past one.

    We think that the outing was tired but we like it.
    Written by Marta, Joan, Pau and Marga.

  22. ariadnabalufo Says:

    1.Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    -Yes, I can.
    2.Spelling?
    -I think the spelling is good
    3.Word choice?
    -I think it is good.
    4.Coherence?
    -I think that it can improve
    5.Organization of ideas?
    -Not very good
    6.Paragraph structure?
    -not very good

  23. silviamartinm Says:

    Finally written by Ariadna, Silvia, Andreu and Josep:

    Last Tuesday about 100 people of 1st year ESO went on an outing to “Port des Canonge”, with two buses. The buses left us near the farm of Esporles. At the begining the day was cloudy but then the sun came out. After walk we found a dead goat near the path. It stunk! Finally the buses picked us up and left us in the high school. There the teachers gave us free time to play and talk with our friends. The best part was that we did different things than other days; but we got lost and that was the worst thing.

  24. silviamartinm Says:

    1.Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I can.

    2.Spelling?
    I think they don’t have any mistake.

    3.Word choice?
    I think they did it very well.

    4.Coherence?
    I think they can do it better.

    5.Organization of ideas?
    I think they can do it better.

    6.Paragraph structure?
    I think thy can do it better.

  25. andreafr98 Says:

    1.- Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I can.
    2.Spelling?
    I think that the spelling is good.
    3.Word choice?
    I think it is good.
    4.Coherence?
    The coherence is good.
    5.Organization of ideas?
    I think that they can improve.
    6.Paragraph structure?
    I think that no is very good.

  26. martitaserra28 Says:

    1-Can you find any mistakes, can you suggest any improvements?
    Yes, I can.
    2-Spelling?
    I think it’s good.
    3-Word choice?
    I think it is good.
    4-Coherence?
    I think that is not very good.
    5-Organization of ideas?
    It’s not good.
    6-Paragraph structure?
    It’s not good.

  27. andreafr98 Says:

    Port des Canonge outing
    Last Tuesday all the students of 1st ESO went to “ Port d’es Canonge’’ with two buses. We wanted to go but, there were some problems : we get lost. We walked and we went up and down approximately two hours.
    In one part of the routes , there were two new routes and we took the wrong way. In one part of this road we found a dead goat. A little bit later , we stopped and we lunch and some of the teachers went to explore the road. In one part of this new way, we found bones. Later, we stopped on a big place and the teachers called the buses. After this, we went in the two buses to the high school. Finally, in the high school, we had free time, and we played and talked about the outing. Some of the girls took photos and the boys played football. We think that the good point is that we can be with our friends and we make some different. The bad point we think is that we got lost and we were very tired.

    This summery is written by : Vladis , Alba , Álvaro and Andrea.

  28. jhazminmarmol Says:

    The outing:
    Last Tuesday 29st of March, all 1st year ESO students(about 1oo people)went to an outing to Port des Canonge. Two buses took us to Esporles’ Farm. Our class went with 1st ESO D. We went across the mountain and during the walk we chose a wrong route and we got lost. Instead of going to the port(down) we went to the mountain’s top to find a road. We find a road and a group of teachers went to seek coverage to call the buses. Few hours later, they came back where we were staying and told us that we had to climb more to took the buses.

    The worsts things were: the firts that we got lost and we arrived 2 hours before to the High School; the second was that a lot of people were very tired. One of the best things is that we did exercise. Another was that we had a great time with our friends and without classes.

    We has two anecdotes: one is we saw a dead goat and a lot of animal’s bones. The other is that at the beginning we saw 2 donkeys singing!

  29. sergiomr226 Says:

    Last Tuesday (29st of March), all the students of first year ESO had to went to “Es Porst d’es Canonge”, with two buses for all morning. We went approximalety 100 people. The two buses pick up at 8:00 and dropped us near the “Esporles Farm” and the mountain. After a long time walking, we arrive to a fork, but we get to the wrong way and the we got lost. Then the teachers called the two buses who comed to pick all of students. The buses led us to school, when we comed two hours before. Finally we went to the courtyard and at 2:10 each people went to his house.

    The bad things: We got lost and we didn’t go to the beach, some people are very tired and we arrived before to the school
    The good things: We played and talked with our friends, we have exercised and we met more people from other groups.

    We had two aneedotes: When we were going up the mountain, we sow a dead stinky goat, but after that, we sow two donkeys.

    If we hadn’t got lost, it would have been better.

  30. paulinguigs Says:

    Correction: Es Port des Canonge
    Last Tuesday we went on an excursion: “Es Port des Canonge”, we went all 1st ESO and we were about 100 people. We took two buses to go there. The weather was cloudy but some hours later it became hot. Later we arrived at the road and we walked about 35 minutes more or less. After that we got lost on the top of the mountain.


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